Freak V.S Shai

This is my contest entry for 's contest. Its not finished but I don't want to miss the due date >.<

Freak is amused to see an insignifigant little wolf in his territory. Shai, natrually, is scared still and is trying to look scarry. Her only option of staying alive means she would have to find a soft spot in Freak and try to stun him for a few minutes with her lightning bite so she could run away. But thats unlikley because Pcycorap's are faster, stronger, and smarter than wolves.

Freakzter has one of the coolest fursonas on DA. He is a pcycoraptor which is kinda like a furry raptor (i think )

I made his tounge orange with white stripes slowly fading, like his black-and-blue leg stripes. I chose orange and white because their opposites to blue and black.

I hope I have all his markings right x_X

Is that a good way of coloring fur, or bad? :s